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You are planning to study English at a college in an English-speaking country. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the college. In your letter, ask about the course they offer ask about the cost of the course say what kind of accommodation you want in the college hostel Write at least 150 words.

#study #english #college #country #information #courses #course #offer #cost #accommodation #hostel
Hello, Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to get some information about the English course that I want to do at your college. Because I want to learn
this
 program deeply, I need details of the curriculum including what level of language you offer, its length, the size of the class, the module and its next starting date. I have been looking for a study for two months and have made a list of different universities with their total cost, so I would to know about
this
 program's fees to take
further
 steps.
Moreover
, It is foreign to me and I do not know anybody there,
therefore
 I have to live at the college hostel where I would like to have my personal room, so I can focus on my career better. I want to start to learn
this
 subject as soon as possible, so reply to me in your free time. Looking forward to hearing from you. Your Faithfully, Ankit
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coherence cohesion
Include a more structured approach by dividing your letter into distinct paragraphs for each question or topic. This helps with clarity and readability.
task achievement
Make sure to use accurate and varied vocabulary to fully express your points. Consider asking about support services for international students as well, to ensure your concerns about being in a foreign country are addressed.
coherence cohesion
The closing was polite and appropriate, maintaining a respectful and formal tone.
task achievement
Each requested detail is mentioned: information about the course, its cost, and accommodation needs.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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