The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
To begin
with, consuming fast foods on a daily basis contributes seriously to the decline of an individual’s health
status. This
is evident even in youngsters at present. For instance
, the availability of fast-food chains all over the country makes it very convenient for everyone to access these foods and encourages them to consume them on a daily basis. The result is people are prone to diseases related to cardiovascular disorders because of the high salt and high sugar content found in these fast food products.
In addition
, stress-related disorders are also
becoming more common nowadays. Everyone is complaining of being subjected to stress daily. Individuals who continually experience stress in their environment are likely to develop both mental and physical disorders. For example
, employees who are overworked tend to develop headaches and stomach issues.
To sum up, I agree with the argument that the average health
standard of an individual will decrease in the future. Whilst some are becoming aware of the health
issues that are emerging at present, the growing consumption of fast foods and the constant exposure to stress will likely contribute to the decline of the average standard of health
of many people in the coming years.Submitted by nagendranp1991 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite