Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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era of modernization shows that

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major

problem's

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for youth who? Using most of

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times

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into

smartphones

and see a bad impact on their studies.

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, I totally believe or agree with

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statement because

smartphones

wasted their

importance

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time

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watching videos and playing games without notice's value

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. On the one hand, on mobile, there have a lot of apps which make young people addicted to using

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day. To explain that

teenager's

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behaviour made roud and aggressive nature without

smartphones

.

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, whenever, they playing or using their mobile and see any disturbing

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then

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totally gone

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out of mind and heat something or somebody for showing that you have

not

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be

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allowed to disturb me.

Thus

, anger level increases during

this

period of

time

while they doing something with their mobile.

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, they skipped their valuable

time

with mobile without using any good words like studying or making some kind of work which

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their future in the coming

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.

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,

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study methods will be lost concentration on dreams.

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, young people have the most important period of

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to work hard for success where youth like 15-25 years old but where most of the trainee involved in massaging, seeing videos and playing with mobile games overalls it takes hole day in same work and it goes daily as they have not seen any trouble or bad results in exam or other activities. In conclusion, where I strongly agree with some guardians who believe that the huge use of

smartphones

impacted badly teenager's minds. And partially I believe that the smartphone where there have a heavy amount of apps are

also

useful as youtube and additional app that gives a new platform to learn with a different idea and one-to-one learning methods to improve their knowledge with the help of online teachers