*Question* Some people believe that to be successful in a sport, natural ability is necessary while others think hard work and practice is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals think that we should pay more attention and
practice
sports activity or physical ability. However
, some people
think that it is better for people
to be encouraged in work
and practice
. In the following paragraphs, both
of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail.
On the one hand, sports activities are beneficial for human health. Most sports or other natural abilities are one way of exercise, so people
can get both
healthy bodies and be able to have a good training at the same time. For instance
, running athletes can accomplish in their career and they also
have good health and shape of the body. Moreover
, people
can do what they love as a job, they would enjoy doing that thing and the result will be appreciated.
On the other hand
, some people
think hard work
is very important and we should practice
in order to gain more skills in work
. For example
, if you were a teacher, you would plan your courses well and practice
your teaching skills every day. Additionally
, people
always want to get a promotion in their work
in order to represent that they are successful in their career, then
people
should have responsibility for their work
, so people
want to express that they are hard-working and dedicate to work
.
In conclusion, both
of these viewpoints have benefits and drawbacks, so people
should decide for themself what activities are suitable for their life. Finally
, people
should have a work
-life balance. In my opinion, both
natural activity and work
are also
important and we should divide proper time between those two activities.Submitted by evaiiz.qxes on
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