In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Town planning was not there in the 80s or 90s. There was no architect, structure or plan while laying out the township. Everything was incoherent, But in a couple of decades things have been changed, local authorities are laying out a plan, and structure to improvise city. one of the aspects of
this
is separate everything from offices to shops, restaurants to schools all are separate from each other. having said that,
this
essay should discuss how
this
aspect helps people and make their life easier at the same time what are the problems of that. If local municipalities distinguish every part of society it would actually help society to understand the town or area better.
Besides
, people shouldn't have to worry about anything let's say if the office or school are situated in the residence area, there will be too much traffic, noise, etc. so you can not feel being in-home the home while in the home. They will always be surrounded by society so they don't get peace while at their residence.
Moreover
, if stores are situated in one's residence
then
they won't get a hard time finding buying stuff which they need because the things would be accessible in one place.
However
, things would get messy when the distance is longer. Suppose someone living in the west and if they'd want to buy something and if shops are located on the east side they need to go all the way down to the east and indeed it is time-consuming and frustrating.
Besides
if authorities segregate frequently
then
it would be hard for folks to understand.
for instance
, Chandigarh which is located in the northern part of India is following
this
method,
although
authorities created too many sectors and the city is now getting convoluted.
Nevertheless
, I would say segregating shops, homes, and schools into individual areas are being useful for authority as well as the community. Despite the fact that it would need strong transportation throughout the city so it people could get easy accessibility to different areas.
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  • spatial organization
  • urban sprawl
  • economic development
  • congestion
  • efficient land use
  • noise pollution
  • mitigating
  • amenities
  • reliance on vehicles
  • commute times
  • socioeconomic groups
  • diversity
  • sense of community
  • mixed-use spaces
  • sustainable urban lifestyles
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