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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, the way we receive news and various contents
is
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 constantly changing.
However
, while there is a view that no printed
newsprepares
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news prepares
 or
books
 will be bought in the future due to the free access
on
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 the Internet, I believe,
although
 it is highly possible,
books
 and printed papers will still be of value in later life.
To begin
 with, the technology boom has affected the way we read or acquire information.
That is
 to say, internet-based tools, stemming from technology development,
such
 as ebooks, social media, and online magazines, not only have made it less expensive to provide us with reading sources, but
also
 they have been more time-efficient and faster ways of absorbing informative knowledge on comparison with published sheets.
For instance
, scientific
books
 cost a fortune these days;
hence
, had it's not been for illegal free versions on the Internet, some deprived students might not have been able to afford them, or looking for these
books
 in shops would have been a waste of time for those who are pressed for time.
Nevertheless
, some
people
 value printed
books
 or publications.
This
 is because, on the one hand, older
people
 have been bound to printed Media more than two ultra-modern platforms. They believe that new platforms might introduce bias, and the public will be ill-formed as the data source is not credible in the virtual world.
On the other hand
,
books
 and newspapers are the major source of revenue for authors and journalists, and free access to the works is a breach of their rights.
Conversely
, if printed publications are eliminated in the future, chances are that writers will lose their job and stop writing because there is no profit in publishing their writings online. The result is that there will be fewer valid tabloids or profound novels on the Internet, let alone to be free. In conclusion, printed records' importance is under threat.
Although
 it seems that ready accessibility to a piece of news or different
books
 is affordable and not consuming, I'm of the opinion that some
people
 are still interested in published press and
books
such
 as older
people
. Had it not been for the published press, we would have never gained the wide range of subjects, given that the writer would not have written any without making money out of it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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