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In many country women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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There are controversial notions heating a debate that it is important for females to spend time with newborns during the
first
 month after giving birth rather than going to work. While
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both pros and cons,
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 would contend that its merits can overwhelm its counterparts. ( CAM TU) Without a shadow of a doubt, there is a wide range of tremendous benefits for females when they temporarily leave their job responsibilities to others after
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. Giving birth is regarded as a precious task which takes them numerous physical and mental health conditions, from which they can be easily susceptible to depression.
Therefore
, they need time to rest which helps them recover health and emotions as well as take care of their newborns simultaneously.
For example
, in Vietnam, birth givers who are employees in national agencies have the right to be absent
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 least 6 months before going back to work.
Hence
, the merits of being off from their occupation after having a newborn baby should be taken into consideration. While the merits of taking charge of their position after pregnancy are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if the demerits of
this
 are ignored. If a wealth of females is absent temporarily, the company can suffer from a workforce crisis. Specifically, they are likely to face
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 shortage of employees which causes vacant positions.
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, Lotte, which is one of the leading companies, is running a great project which needs a large number of workers,
however
, there is a shortage of employees because of maternity leave.
As a result
,
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 interruption in operation or even
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 loss in profits for the organization.
Therefore
, there are a bunch of consequences that severely affect when plentiful pregnant staff are off the vocation. In conclusion,
although
 the disadvantages of maternity leave can be cited, I strongly believe that the advantages should be put
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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