Write about the following topic: Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Many people consume only
vegetables
and fruits in their
food
. It is important to have
meat
and
fish
for all
kind
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kinds
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of
neutrients
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nutrients
in
diet
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the diet
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. The
difficiency
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deficiency
of vitamins may lead to health issues .
This
essay will discuss
about
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importance
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the importance
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of
meat
and
fish
in
food
to maintain good health. The types of
neutrients
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nutrients
available in
vegetables
and fruits may not be sufficient
to
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human
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the human
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body to maintain stamina for
longer
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a longer
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time. The vitamins required for good mental and physical health are easily
availble
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available
from the sea foods. The consumption of non-veg
food
could maintain
natural
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the natural
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eco-system
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ecosystem
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in its best way. To grow
amount
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the amount
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of
vegetables
required may need huge land, fertilizer and pesticides which can be harmful to
environment
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the environment
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. While the
suffient
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sufficient
quantities of
meat
or
fish
is
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are
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available naturally.
Moreover
, the human teeth
is
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are
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designed to eat
meat
and
fish
comfartably
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comfortably
comfortable
which indicates
the
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that
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these species are eatable. Some people have different spiritual theories that
not
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do not
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allowing
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allow
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them to have
meat
or
fish
in their
diate
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diet
date
plan.
The recent
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research says that around 32% of
global
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the global
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population
are
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not consuming
meat
or
fish
as
food
. The government shall run social awareness program to avoid
mis-conceptions
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misconceptions
regarding
the
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apply
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food
habits. The
neutrients
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nutrients
available in
meat
and
fish
are quite cheaper as
compare
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compared
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to the other foods. The production of
vegetables
and fruits may lead to severe pollution of
environment
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the environment
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, land, air and water. The consumption of
meat
and
fish
in
food
would balance
environment
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the environment
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and benefit of
universe
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the universe
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.
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