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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#students #school
In the past and present, the
performance
 of the student was better when they were motivated
with
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 different types of incentives. They apply themselves
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 they can’t perform well. I support these changes and in
this
 essay, I will present some reasons to indicate the benefits of
this
 view.
Firstly
,
students
 who have been granted at school for their noteworthy
performance
 have several benefits for their
next
performance
 in school subjects and future development.
For example
, in most private schools often after graduating, all children will be awarded
with
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honorable
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 medals for their academic achievements.
This
 can positively affect the overall
performance
 of a student and can cause the development of a successful person.
On the other hand
, when
students
 are punished in a classroom, the amount of positive energy and thinking will decrease. They think to themselves that they can’t perform well. As an example, in the past, many schools applied different types of penalties when
students
 disobeyed teachers or showed poor attendance at classes. Teachers punished
students
 by putting them in the corner of a class for some time, giving them the command to raise chairs, and decreasing their marks.
This
 has both short-term and long-term negative effects on the growing individual.
As a result
,
such
 children gain bad characters and remain unhappy, dissatisfied, and sometimes nervous. In conclusion, it is my belief that better class
performance
 in educational institutions will bring greater accomplishments in the long term for both
students
 and society.
Additionally
, it can contribute to the emergence of successful and mature individuals in the country.
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