You have recently started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: - Explain the reasons why you changed jobs. - Describe your new job. - Tell him/her your other news.

#company #friend #jobs #job #news

Dear Areeza, How are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. It’s been only a few months since we met

last

, but it looks really long.

However

, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have secured a

job

in a well-established travel company. You must remember, I was looking for a change for quite some time.

However

, my previous company was good. They are paying me well; The co-workers were good too but after a point, I started feeling I am not able to utilize my potential.

Hence

, I started giving an interview and luckily I grabbed

this

opportunity as an Internation travel manager.

This

job

is giving me an opportunity to meet new people from all over the world.

Also

, my

job

package includes travelling to a country for 10 days and I will be shooting my travel blogs for my company I found

this

quite interesting. What do you think? Let me know your thoughts about my new

job

. Give my regards to your family members and especially your younger sister. With love, KG

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

182 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Write a letter of complaint about late delivery to the website where you ordered an item. In the letter, you should tell:- - What item did you order? - Why and when did you order that item? - How would you like them to resolve this issue?

The decline in the number of people reading books is a concern for many. What measures can be taken to promote reading and support the publishing industry?

Parents should encourage children spend less time on studying and more time on doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.