Discuss the advantages and the disdavantages of study abroad

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university

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they graduate for and the result was the people

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states and

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in abroad,thought the destination is the

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more sane

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world

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there are

disfavatages

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disadvantages

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However

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the responsibility will increase and increase,

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of

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horrifying

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hidden

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disadvantages

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is due to life experiences

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although

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companies

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my opinion,I believe it

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for the person if he can or not for

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finished

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or school proportion 100And there is a lot of pupils the withdraw from the

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course.