Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Sam, I was delighted to receive your letter and know how excited you are about our movie plan for the coming month. I am disheartened to let you know that I won’t be able to accompany you to Marvel’s film. You already know that I am a diehard Marvel fan and always enthralled by seeing the heartthrob Iron Man from the Marvels.

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60 days and I will be travelling to Pune for the same.

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training will enhance my technical knowledge and it is cardinal for my job profile to climb the corporate ladder. As we have already booked early bird tickets to avail

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incredible show, you can take along my best friend Rahul with you. He is a cinema buff,

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, he is dabbling in writing some movie blogs too. Apart from that, he is an extrovert, and I am sure you both will click together. Let me know how you feel about going along with Rahul for the film. Warm regards, Devika

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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