You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In
this
modern era, Education plays an important role in our life. It
also
helps us to survive in the world. Some people think that the students should study the
science
of
food
and how to prepare it. But others say that school time should be used in learning importing
subjects
. I will discuss both views in the upcoming essay. To commence with, If the learners should learn the
food
of
science
and
also
learn how to prepare it
then
due to
this
, they increase their
knowledge
about
food
.
Hence
, They have known about the nutrients and proteins which help us to keep healthy ourselves and society
also
. Because they have enough perfect
knowledge
about every
food
and fruits and the merits and demerits of the
food
.
Moreover
, In
future
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,future
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they will get
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a job
show examples
job
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jobs
show examples
in
this
field.
For example
, In
the
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apply
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japan the
food
science
subject is mandatory
that is
why the
japanist
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japanise
japan
japans
are so healthy.
On the other hand
, The other
subjects
give them
knowledge
about other important things which helps us to survive in the society or world. Because without
science
we can not know about things or why they happened. Due to the
science
the scientist solve the lots of problems and mith about nature. So if they have
knowledge
about all the
subjects
then
in future they have lots of ways to settle down in which stream they are interested.
For instance
,
some
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if some
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students are weak in
science
then
they can choose
engineering
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to engineer
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and take
future
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a future
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in that field. To conclude, No doubt the all
subjects
are
neccessary
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necessary
but the
science
of
food
is
also
important to enhance their
knowledge
and if they have
knowledge
about foods
then
they can take good diet and they are independent.
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