Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions.
In the modern world,
youth
crime
is a well-discussed topic. By raising Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of guilty youngsters worldwide, people have concerned about it. Fix the agreement mistake
number
This
essay will explain two reasons of
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for
youth
crime
and some solutions for it.
Unfortunately, there would be many various youth
crime
facts but the first
major fact is poverty. In many high population cities such
as India, most citizens live
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tolive
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below
blow
the poverty level. Correct your spelling
below
Consequently
, there were not any equalities for children and they have been pursued to commit different
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a different
crime
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crimes
to
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in
compensation
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compensate
their
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for their
first
needs in life. The other reason would be nurture
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to nurture
nurturing
last
but not least. Some researches show that youngsters who have no parents or good families,
are ready to commit any Remove the comma
apply
crime
because parenting is essential for youth
and it plays imperative
role in their life. An example can be seen as orphans, they are Add an article
an imperative
over sensitive
and need more attention. If they have been trained weakly, they would commit Add a hyphen
over-sensitive
crime
easily.
It seems, Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
solutions
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that solutions
are depends
on Change the verb form
depend
geographic
situation and it adjusted but some of them are common. Add an article
the geographic
Firstly
, the government can determine funds or budgets on
caring Change preposition
for
children
who Change preposition
for children
have
not suitable Add a missing verb
do have
lifestyle
and cannot resolve their Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
first
needs. It leads to decreasing youth
crime
so there because
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ofbecause
not
motivation for them. Correct your spelling
no
For example
, Europe’s authorities support economical youth
up to eighteen and youth
crime
become
lower. Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
Moreover
, parents and education organizations such
as schools would focus on youth
mentally problems and training them in superb ways, especially orphans. If children learnt well in schools
, they would be in Fix the agreement mistake
school
right
way and do not criminal activities.
In conclusion, Add an article
the right
youth
crime
is a huge problem worldwide due to poverty and nurture but fortunately
there are many solutions as the government supports.Add a comma
,fortunately
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