You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: Apologize for the damage to the item Explain what happened Say how you are going to fix the issue

Dear Ali, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to apologize to you for the damage I caused to the

cellphone

charger

I borrowed from you yesterday. I feel really embarrassed about the incident. When I borrowed the

charger

from you I plugged it in to charge my cellular phone but suddenly the power went off and there was no electrical protection between the plug and your

charger

and

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when I checked my

cellphone

I realized that it was not charging and I guess that your

charger

has been damaged. So when the power came back I checked your

charger

again and it did not charge my

cellphone

and I found out it had been damaged. So I decided to go to an electrical shop and get it fixed. But the technician told me it has been damaged badly and it is unrepairable.

Therefore

, I want to go to the market

this

weekend and I have planned to buy a new

cellphone

charger

for you. I look forward to receiving forgiveness from you. Best regards,

khashayar

Correct your spelling

Kashyap

Submitted by khashayarpartovi on Thu Feb 29 2024

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7 paragraphs

180 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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