Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world some people think that this can not be taken change while others believe action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often believed by some that adverse effect on plants and animals due to human

activity

cannot be taken change because many

discovery

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are

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taking place

day

by

day

which has

direct

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a direct

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impact on plants and animals

however

others are against

of

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that

this

can be taken change by using the discovered

gadzets

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gadgets

when it needed only.

On the other hand

, human

activity

is necessary

evils

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. It has both negative as well as

positive

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a positive

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impact

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impacts

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on our environment considering positive points due to different human

activity

we are leading our life happily if human

activity

were stopped in past we were still living in

jungle

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the jungle

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without clothes and hunting animals for food and staying on

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the tree

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to get protected from sunny days and rain. Every human

activity

is needed for the development of human activities and leading our life comfortably.

Moreover

, if

this

kind

of

activity

goes

in

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on

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increasing

day

by

day

we will feel difficulties leading our life happily

these

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this kind

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kind

of human

activity

is polluting

are

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our

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nature

day

by

day

. If

this

kind

of

activities

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activity

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goes on rising we will even feel

problem

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problems

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while taking oxygen, drinking water and many more. If

this

kind

of

kind of

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apply

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activities

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activity

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goes on rising our modern society will again change

in

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from

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stone

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age society. In conclusion, what

i

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feel

proper

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and limited amount of human

activity

is necessary to keep our environment

balnced

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balanced

and the adverse effect of human

activity

will decrease

day

by

day

at

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, at last,

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last

our environment will be balanced.