Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try an improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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it is sometimes thought that it is advantageous when
people
admit hardships, others believe it is preferable to mitigate
such
circumstances. In my opinion, I consider that acknowledging difficulty is the most practicable way of coping with catastrophe. On the one hand, many individuals think that
people
who affirm predicaments have a better understanding of their state, and become
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problem
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This
is because they accept reality as it is rather than how they would want it to be.
For example
, when a man who got a rejection offer after an interview, while job hunting consent to his
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instead
of wallowing in denial. He
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to his failure. For
this
reason, he would be informed about his condition and be in
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position to consider other options and choose
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action plan.
In addition
, acceptance of trials supports
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emotional and physical health. In
this
way, undue stress that might ensue when we try to avoid reality is completely avoided.
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there is inner peace as we relax into reality and a lot of energy at
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disposal to appreciate all aspects of the
situation
without judgement.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that
people
learn well, as well as become a better version of
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if they make some effort to change
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they are faced with.
In other words
, if individuals consider failure as a life lesson that can
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on, they would make attempt to analyse the
situation
, figure out what went wrong,
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all questions that arise. A person who lost a job contract and
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a desire to probe the causes,
for instance
, would use information from his findings in any similar
situation
.
Hence
, the individual will work harder
next
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in his opinion that led to non-success.
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to mitigate
bad
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situation
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will improve one enthusiasm.
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to say, keeping a positive attitude
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unpleasant state boost willpower, perseverance and desire to succeed.
Therefore
, making
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stronger, better prepared and more motivated. In conclusion, while
people
may vary in their opinion, It seems to me that taking on challenges is a viable way of providing reasonable solutions to life distress and having
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emotional stability.
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