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in many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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It is believed that the youngsters may be discouraged from taking part in any
sport
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 major
as a result
 of the widespread coverage of it.
Although
 some individuals agree with
this
 idea I believe that it has more positive effects on the young people like finding their desired kind of
sport
 and being motivated to have an active lifestyle.
Firstly
, watching various athletic
competitions
 on television can give adolescents an opportunity to gain knowledge about different majors and a chance to be into one of them.That leads to finding their favourite field by watching TV.
For instance
, I remember when I was in secondary school, I was watching a tennis competition with my uncle while I had not done it before.
However
, I was attracted to it from that moment and I have decided to learn tennis since that duration.As a consequence, the abundance of different
competitions
such
 as soccer, tennis, martial arts , etc may be an efficient way to find interests for teenagers.
Also
, the idea can motivate youngsters to be an athlete or at least have a healthy life.Following the
competitions
 may encourage youths to join a particular
sport
 as they enjoy athletic muscular bodies and the fame of the competitors .So, they can choose an appropriate role model to turn into in the future. Some people think that watching a huge amount of
sport
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 competition may make the young lazy .So, they might be used to being a fan of a
sport
instead
 of experiencing them.
Although
 there are some exceptions which received a negative influence from watching the
competitions
, people mostly become energetic when watching something and they try to simulate it at home or follow it by taking a course. In conclusion, I reckon being a fan of
sport
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 incidents and following them in different media
such
 as television can be a helpful way for teenagers for finding their interests and motivating to be
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healthy
individual
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 which is the opposite of the opinions of some folks who think the other way.
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