Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled and that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Recycling is one of the best ways to safeguard our environment. Many
people
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argue that since we don’t have any mandate from the government
offcials
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officials
, citizens are not indulged in
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channelising
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their waste. I absolutely resonate with
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though and will share my viewpoint in the upcoming
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paragraphs
. To commence with, only stringent policies will help us to overcome the waste management challenge.
Currently
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handful
residents
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segregrate
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segregate
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rubbish and prepare compost of biodegradable waste, while others don’t pay heed. Only when an order is passed,
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people
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tend to obey things.
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, in India
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were inspired to ban
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plastic when communicated by a famous political leader,
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as it’s not a
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compulsion
completion
,
people
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gradually ignore
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move. Perhaps a stern law on the same
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will help to mitigate the
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usage
.
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, government
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personnel
have
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to penalise those who fail to follow legislation.
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,
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will encourage
people
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to abide by the rules and abate use and throw culture.
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Furthermore
, activists are the real protagonist to spread
awarness
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awareness
among different locals to reuse
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junk but
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it just
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of the iceberg. In
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, if they are backed with legal rules
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they can
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seize
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opportunity to work in collaboration with
people
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to achieve greater outcomes. Eventually, with
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and time,
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move will be ingrained in everyone and
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individuals will
conciously
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consciously
follow suit and strive to reprocess garbage.
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, mass movement will help each and every household
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reuse
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of debris. To summarise,
people
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usually don’t tend to break the regulations and
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having a legal guideline will assist
people
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to take
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recycling
recyling
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the recyling
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process into genuine consideration. Social workers and
comman
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common
man could work hand in hand to make
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possible. It will eventually make everyone habitual of reusing the trash.
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