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It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#repair #buildings #money
As the technology advancement is there in the stream of civil engineering, most
of
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the
people
fascinates
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towards
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 the modern building
instead
 of renovating old buildings.
In
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 my standpoint, I agree with the statement. The forthcoming paragraphs elucidate relevant reasons with supporting
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 to support my opinion.
To embark
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on
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, spending money on
contemporary
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a contemporary
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house
 can be
benefited
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 in numerous ways. Nowadays civil engineering technology led
the
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 advancement in the infrastructure of
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building
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. To explain it,
new
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 conception of
building
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 by using enough strong material and deploying qualified engineers make
modern
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a modern
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house
 which is sustainable in
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disaster
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such
 as storms, and earthquakes.
Moreover
, sometimes
people
 end up
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living in
old
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an old
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house
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, because of various reasons
such
 as the lack of proper utilization of spaces like vehicle parking space, dissatisfaction of interior of
house
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the house
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 and many more.
For example
,
old
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house
 was not built as per
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 scenario as today's every family is having 2 to 3 vehicles (Car, bike) in their houses.
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, that
house
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 these vehicles due to lack of space.
Thus
, making modern
house
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 of their own
choices
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 can be
only
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 solution
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 these problems. To sum up,
although
 some
people
 believe that building
new
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 contemporary
house
 will cost extravagant and is time taking process, in my opinion spending money and time on
new
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house
 is
one time
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 effort that could be assisting
people
 in long run and to cope
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with the problems that they felt in their old
house
 and that make them more satisfied.
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