Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people say that it is too late to do something while others think that actions can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion.

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chronic exposure yet taking

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action seems impossible. People like to force unsustainable resources as much as they could for the sake of their

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sustainability is degrading since the infrastructure developments are getting wider

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of everyone's actions in their daily life.

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given

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chances to destroy our environment.

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