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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject.

#friend #course #university #advice
Dear James, I am happy to hear that you will be joining me at my precious Istanbul Technical University. As you know we are very fond of our school and we are proud of our achievements here.
This
 course called “
Construction
Management
” that you will be taking will contribute to your education in a way that you can consider a torch illuminating your road. Compared to Project
management
,
Construction
management
 offers more focus on organization, manpower and resources
management
 of a
Construction
 project namely a
construction
 site. Everyone graduating from your civil engineering department has knowledge about how to build with concrete or structural steel. ,
However
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 they do not know that they do not know how to do it efficiently and with less stress. As a future
construction
 ,
manager
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 you should bear in mind that when you are managing your project it is not only getting finishing works or concrete casting works done, more ,importantly what counts really is how quickly you do it with optimal quality. Not too much and not less than required will be defining your success when managing resources and doing time
management
. All these factors will be explained in the course which may have a tremendous effect on your career. About the quality of my
university
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 I do not need to talk too much since it is one of the top tier universities in engineering and architecture in Turkiye. Only the best of the best come to study here.
Hence
 you shall feel at home. With all those sweet details in your mind don’t let your guard down. You shall provide all reference letters and documentation required for your application. The simplest error or inconsistency in your application may get you rejected.
Therefore
 please double or triple check your final submittal of documents before submitting. I hope to see you soon at school, take care of yourself. Yours, Kadem
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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