Many people think that it is better to get advice from old rather than young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there is a growing tendency to seek suggestions from anyone. Some
people
argue that it is better to get recommendations from elders rather than youngsters,whereas others believe the opposite. In my point of view, the given
advice
of old
people
is more beneficial for some pieces of
advice
than young
people
's bits of suggestion but young
people
's
advice
is important for in today's world. One of the reasons that older
people
give better
advice
is that they have opinions shaped through years of experience. Old
people
could have effective and abstract experiments for the many parts before in their lives.
That is
why they have clear suggestions and they know how the problems can be handled and solved.
Furthermore
, young
people
have expanded confidence by
advice
from elders as youngsters do not have an idealistic mind.
Additionally
, old
people
are able to have intimacy,
instead
of youth, because the generation of old usually behaves less self-involved. Having said that, the
advice
of young peoples are more reasonable than old
people
with regard to today's modern technology era.
To begin
with, Youngsters have
much
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information about technological advancements.
For instance
, if I need to smartphone or laptop,
i
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always ask my friend for
advice
. She is better aware of the latest products ,unlike old
people
.
Lastly
, the young generation would
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wiser than the elders because they can ask for and find whatever they want .Young
people
are eager to technologies for competing benefits. To sum up, thanks to the
advice
, many different generations ensure numerous
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advice
advices
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advice
pieces of advice
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about different parts.To me, older
people
's
advice
are
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more beneficial than young
people
's
advice
since older
people
provide us with abstractive and attractive
advice
with ease.
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