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In the developed world, technological progress is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of radical technological advancements.

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In
this
 era, everyone involves in a hi-tech advancement. I extremely agree with
this
 point because through
this
 people are attainable to reach their goals, and it makes a strength all over the globe.
Although
 every progression has some true or false aspects as well.
Therefore
, some adverse results we have, and hard to tackle with it.
To begin
 with, automation develops the whole nation in a very short period. It is an unbelievable achievement undoubtedly.
Furthermore
, looking into it, the whole world looks like a slave with
this
 progression. In
this
 modern
time
, all humans are interested to use the internet, phone, and social media. They believe why they do anything by themselves when provisionally
technology
 is a durable and easiest way to solve all the problems. Most of the
time
 what we think is reasonable
however
, it has some appalling outcome. In general, people are dragging in
this
 misfortune without knowing how much they are immersive in
this
technology
,
likewise
 that they forget to deal with insignificant problems. They completely ignored it and do not bother to know how humanity is suffering, despite
this
technology
that is
 dominating the world.
For instance
, the parents do not have
time
 to spend with their children; they are busy on their phones or the internet: the same thing children are doing.
As a result
, the children are indulging in dangerous activities and become defiant. The relationship between them is not authoritative as it was before. Significantly, we can resolve
this
 calamity with little effort.
For example
, some countries ban to use of these professional or personal gadgets after work. It is a very useful step to save the world and relationships. Every country must have a law to use
technology
 every day for a limited
time
.
However
,
this
 should not impact health and happiness for all generations. In conclusion, I just want to say
technology
 is good for humanity
therefore
 if you are not addicted to it, is useful and harmless.
Submitted by ahtesham on

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