Some people say that what children watch influences their behaviours. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behaviours the most. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The making development of
children
is one of the important things
that parents and teachers should concernabout
. It along with a behaviour of a child are a key to predict in the near future . Correct your spelling
concern about
Therefore
, some proponent points out that something that attracts a kid can potentially contact to
their mind and what they are thinking about . Whereas others argue that television is the most influential device for people , especially for kids . Both Change preposition
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of
opinions will be cleared in Change preposition
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this
case.
Almost children
are keep
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keep
eyes
on something like mainstream on their activity that makes them be appetited . Even they can do an impression of somebody have inspired them . Many Correct the article-noun agreement
eye
things
can make them excited such
as an impressive character in a film or a video game, also
a politician , one
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of
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or
along
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talent
for conducting countries . Adolf Hitler is Add an article
a talent
the talent
most
famous political person Correct article usage
the most
also
the most famous predator in human history . he controlled his country and Correct word choice
and also
militaries
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military
by
his silly strategy or crazy Change preposition
through
think
that the people Replace the word
thinking
such
as a kid supposed that he was a man whose civilians in Germany at that time were proud of his career and believed that he was a god on German history . He created a trend by his sign that children
do an impression of his gesture once he greeted a people and stood on his automatic with unique behaviour that was followed by children
. What a silly propagandas
in that time that Hitler had influenced Fix the agreement mistake
propaganda
to
their mind .
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Besides
, television also
a unit can
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that can
involves
directly to behaviours Change the verb form
involve
on
kids . For Change preposition
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example
children
usually appeals
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appeal
on
a powerful character on a Change preposition
to
catoon
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cartoon
such
as a spiderman or Joker , each of who
makes the audience like Correct pronoun usage
which
children
more impressed by active heroes that they will buy a likewise
of their clothes to turn into a character on film . The main problem is children
can be influenced easily by a film on television .
In conclusion , a kid can be contacted to their think because of a small age . I'm sure that TV is not a unique thing on
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things
influence them . There are many things
outside will
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