Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

An increasing number of

people

participate in many high-risk

sports

although

they know clearly about these

sports

'

danger

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dangers

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. In

this

essay, I'm going to examine some of the main reasons why

people

engage in

such

sports

and suggest ways how to reduce these risks. One of the

reason

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reasons

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is that they get the thrill out of them. Sometimes

people

challenge their abilities and

potentials

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potential

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and

then

feel a sense of satisfaction when they encounter

with

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fears.

For example

, Bungee Jumping is one of the

dangerous

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sport

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sports

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but they want to know how they feel when jumping from

high

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a high

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level.

In addition

, if they overcome dangerous

experience

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experiences

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, they will gain more

confident

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and courage in their daily life. Another reason

of

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pursuing

this

type of

sports

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sport

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is that there is a lot of fame and money involved in them. To elaborate

further

, they will get more public attention by doing stunts on

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a motorcycle

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motorcycle

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motorcycles

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and jumping from

high

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a high

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building

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buildings

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.

Besides

, they are well-known among

people

and

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businesses

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business man

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are invited to endorse their products. In

this

way, they will make money from playing risky

sports

.

On the other hand

, there are many steps to reduce

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this

threatening accident.

Firstly

, these

sports

should

be play

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under

a

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strict supervision. In fact, they should wear safety

equipments

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equipment

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and follow the safety rule and regulations.

Secondly

, an athlete or

people

who

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must train a sufficient training under a

license

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trainer before taking part in these activities. These can help them to restrict dangerous results which can happen during their activities. To conclude,

although

many

people

are liked to participate in adventure

sports

, they should take

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proper training and follow safety precautions so that they can limit dangerous accidents.