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Topic Technology development in a country may cause the death of tradition skills and ways of life. It is pointless to ensure the survival of tradition skills and ways of life. To what extend do you agree or disagree with the above?

#topic #technology #development #country #death #tradition #skills #life
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technology affects many areas, it is felt in deep
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 the culture.
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technological improvements erode our traditional structures.
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, as it is mentioned in the topic, from my point of view, the idea about every effort to bring to life
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cultural and traditional habits is meaningless does not reflect the fact.
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,
this
 is a rather pessimistic approach. Behalf of explaining the topic given above, it would be a good idea to express the main difference between these two notions. While the cultural and traditional habits are based on interaction more among people, the technology focuses on computer and software implementations. From
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another perspective, a lifestyle based on
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the computer
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computer
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 is away from human instinct. Normally, it is a most likely consequence that
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technology has a harmful effect on our traditional lives. On the other side, it is not a reasonable opinion that historical ties of individuals do not carry any importance, what is more, all traditional
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practices
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the agricultural
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 field. As it is well known, people commence refraining from the heavy technological practices,
such
 as inorganic chemical substances, in order to obtain more yields.
Instead
 of it, old methods are embraced more
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today
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analogous
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can be extended to various domains. The common belief
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technologic
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 improvements will supersede the traditional abilities coming from history can
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the unreal ways human-being.
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