I have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in an Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter the couple, in your letter: explain why you think you would be suitable the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have seen the advertisement in order to teach

Portuguese

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to your

yonger

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younger

children for one year and I would wonder to introduce myself to

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job position. I

gratuated

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graduated

Portuguese

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Literature in Brazil

last

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year and I have three years of teaching

class

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in my hometown. I used to

teaching

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teach

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Portuguese

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in a public school to kids until adults as part

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a volunteering job that I had. I am able to offer a nice experience in learning

foreign

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a foreign

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language as I am keen to work with the

forth

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fourth

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abilities in a

creativity

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way.

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, I am capable to play,

to craft

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and introduce a bit of my culture to

yours

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kids. I believed that in order to learn a language the person has to have a deeper experience.

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, I might go on

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some places, here in Australia, which

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are

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full of things to do and reminds the

Portuguese

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Ancerstors

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. I am looking forward to achieving

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position because I have just settled in Australia and for

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,me

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this

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would be a nice job to have. I really appreciate

to work

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with kids and I believe that the speed that the

yongest

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youngest

learning is unbelievable. I look forward to hearing

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from

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form

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from

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you.

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Your

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sincerely, Anna Fox.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

215 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

TESOL certification
Experience in teaching children
Knowledge of Australian culture
Passion for language education
Flexible and adaptable
Design customized lesson plans
Patient and understanding
Strong communication skills
Interpersonal skills
Participate in family activities
Enthusiasm for cultural exchange

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