Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher; others think that it depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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depends on the education provided to him during his early stage. It is ,

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argued that an efficient tutor might play a crucial role in the process with a few ,owing to an individual

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's potential.

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essay discusses both perspectives and provides my take on them.

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,an educator is well trained and equipped to stimulate young minds and encourage them to achieve great heights ,in terms of a career and overall growth.An enthusiastic

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can inspire even an average pupil to learn new subjects by making them interesting and improving his overall scholastic abilities.

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,environmental sciences which are considered a mundane topic to teach

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can be made exciting by a capable

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by using audio visual media and field trips.With proper mentorship,a struggling

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can attain higher grades in examinations and motivation to become a good student over time.I can vouch for

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because the reason for my improved English is my language

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,who took extra efforts in providing interactive methods for learning literature.

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,every

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has a specific level of grasping capacity and can excel even in poor teaching circumstances.

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the

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provides an equal approach to curriculum,few tend to obtain it faster and easier than the others.

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,Ekalavya,a renowned character from mythological scriptures,is coined as the best student of Dronacharya who learnt archery using minimal resources ,only because of his incredible zeal to learn the skill.There are several articles which display outstanding results in competitive exams by underprivileged children ,who overcome limited educational resources and teaching faculty. In conclusion,

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the success of a

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,which may be either determined by a qualified

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or his own grit is debatable,I am of the opinion that ,a combination of both the factors is required for the holistic development of a

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