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The two layouts illustrate how the sports center of a university will change after the developments planned in the future.

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Overall, growth in the size of the
sports
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 is observed after the manipulations.
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, there are significant changes in the
facility
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 according to the planned improvements. Currently, a 25-meter-long
pool
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 is situated in the middle of the
sports
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.
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, the
pool
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 is surrounded by a changing room, a gym, a seating area, and a reception which are located to the
west
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, north, east, and south of the university
sports
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, respectively.
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, there are two outdoor courts which are to the
west
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 and east of the
facility
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. According to the plans, universe city's
sports
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 will grow in size due to the new departments. The 25-meter-long
pool
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 and the surroundings (changing room, gym, seating, reception) will not be removed.
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, the gym will be extended to the east.
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,
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 of the western outdoor court, an additional
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, which will be used for leisure activities, will be built to the
west
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 of the
sports
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. Changing rooms will be added to the southwest and southeast of the
facility
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, sa ports shops and café will be opened to the
west
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 and east of the entrance.
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, changing room and dance studios will be constructed to the east of the
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facility
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