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Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the
tourism
industry
 has become essential for
countries
 to earn money. Some
people
 believe that it can have a significant impact on
countries
 legacy. But others, including me, assume that it can be more beneficial for the country.
Firstly
,
countries
, especially developed ones, have been more dependent on
tourism
 income than before in the
last
 few years. International travel opened up a great opportunity for nations to increase the amount of money they can receive from the tourists by selling their products, handicrafts, and traditional foods and rental fee.
Hence
,
this
 money helps them to improve the quality of their life.
Traveling
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 foreign
people
 to another country can broaden local
people
's horizons. Human beings' cultures consist of a variety of aspects. A few decades ago,
people
 had found it hard to deal with these issues.
However
, they have learned how to cope with other cultures due to
people
's interaction and
tourism
industry
 development. So, hopefully, it is not a big deal anymore. Surprisingly, some
countries
 found some drawbacks to increasing
tourism
 in their fatherland. Take African
countries
 as an example,
this
 kind of
countries
 have too strict native peoples who are against any modernization.
For instance
, they believe that
tourism
 may disturb their juveniles' minds. The
tourism
industry
 may distract them from their parents' habitat.
Consequently
, they became alienated and may even want to learn and use their languages and forget about their mother tong. To conclude, the advantages of the
tourism
industry
 have overcome the disadvantages. Communication between
countries
 can enhance
people
's and government's income and make
people
 more open-minded. So, we can ignore the problems.
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