Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

In

this

contemporary era, the advent of technology has becoming a major impact on human life. More, people have gained these technological facilities which are helped them to

living

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in a standard

way

in

this

modern and hectic social community.

Besides

, some of them believe

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period is the best

time

in history whereas others think past

time

would be

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advantageous in their lifetime.

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essay will focus on these two views and eventually, I will elaborate on my opinion.

To begin

with, presently, wherever automation equipment

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high demand among human beings. Significantly, they have several opportunities to do their occasional chaos

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these gadgets in a productive

way

.

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, digital devices suchlike computers and laptops give their assistance to do job-related work and online studies without wasting money

for

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transport facilities.

As a result

, automation science has been performing to fulfil

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a bunch of needs and requirements in their daily routines because of these conveniences various new innovations are born increasingly around the globe.

On the other hand

, other citizens argued ,

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decades ago was the best history of

time

wherever without automation equipment.

Further

, they had tried to progress their standard lifestyle

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their own courage and commitments.

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, in

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the 1960

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and 1980 period, communities were engaging with their family members to

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their leisure

time

in a meaningful process.

Therefore

, compared to

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the present

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, humans have used Facebook WhatsApp and so on and they are not able to build relationships with their

family

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however

,

earlier

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community

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communities

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always

were tend

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to live with them . In conclusion, in my perspective

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, wherever we should want to utilize our

time

in a productive

way

rather than past . If we do

such

in our life, we will easily overcome our barriers and we can make our life in a better

way

.