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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job write at least 150 words

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Dear Chris,
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 been a while since we caught up. I have been busy with work and
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 why I couldn't find the time to write back to you sooner. You had mentioned that you are interested in working in
United
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 States and would be willing to move here, whenever an exciting job offer turns up. I recently came across a 'project developer' vacant
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 in a tech company online called 'Nvidia'. It is
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 diverse
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 where the prospective candidate would be involved in working with cross-functional teams. It
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 involves working as a liaison between technical and higher management teams. I believe
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 matches very much with your profile and skill set. Given your background working as a 'project coordinator', I believe you have certainly developed the skills that
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 job demands. It very much aligns with your academic credentials and the skills that you have developed as a project coordinator. In order to apply for
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to
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apply
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you need
email
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 your resume and cover letter to [email protected]. I
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 have a friend in
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 company who knows the hiring manager for
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. He shall
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 put in a good word for you as a support to your job application. As here in the US a good word goes a long way. Please let me know when you apply for
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 or hear back from the hiring manager regarding the same. I'll work with you to manage any documentation or paperwork pertaining to visa
application
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 as well. Yours faithfully, Zach
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reputation
  • industry
  • duties and responsibilities
  • typical day
  • skills and experiences
  • job requirements
  • company culture
  • personality
  • work ethic
  • application process
  • job listing
  • submit an application
  • documents required
  • tailored resume
  • cover letter
  • relevant experiences
  • reviewing documents
  • practicing for interviews
  • promptly
  • deadlines
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