Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and ef ects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions

Over the years ,adolescence overweight has become more severe, and there is a common belief that underage fatness could be considered

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the highest danger to the young generation. In

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essay, the causes of

this

issue will be analysed with relevant solutions.

Firstly

, the obvious cause of plumpness is the amount of junk

food

and soft drinks consumed by an average schoolchild.

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, fast

food

contains a lot of calories and fat, while fuzzy drinks include several dozen grams of sugar per

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.

As a result

, these ingredients lead to

unhealthy

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and unfit diet. The solution to

this

would be to provide youth with healthy, home-prepared

food

, control

diet

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with the help of

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professional nutritionist and limit the number of junk

food

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on the streets and online. Encouraging parents to take

such

measures would decrease the obesity rate among school children.

Secondly

, the lack of exercise and physical activity contributes to the fatness

problem

. Most adolescents spend their free time playing computer games and watching TV series, which leads to

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of movements.

This

tends to a higher risk of disease,

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diabetes, heart disease and cancer. To tackle

this

issue, parents and governments should work together on scheduling more physical education classes in schools, organizing

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clubs and encouraging youth to take regular exercise. To sum up, childhood obesity has become a crucial

problem

in many countries, due to reasons

such

as junk

food

, computer gaming and deficiency

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exercise.

This

is a serious

problem

, and unless we can change the trend, the coming generation will suffer. In my opinion authorities and parents should cooperate to solve the

problem

.