Many species of animals all around the world are on the verge of extinction. Some say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is now said that many wild

animals

are in

danger

and the background of

this

issue is attributed to several factors. The idea that human beings should focus on preserving those

species

more than any other problem is both agreed upon and disagreed with by many. The two sides of

this

argument will be thoroughly discussed and analysed before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

Firstly

, people clearly ought to understand that progressing extinction is not just a problem of the

species

.

For instance

, in Africa now one

bird

is in

danger

, so the local government implemented a rule to conserve the

bird

. It is not just because the

bird

is unique and important enough to preserve, but because we need to avoid a vicious circle. If the

bird

extincted

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extinct

, the pollen of the local flowers which is supposed to be delivered by the

bird

would face

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difficulty since they would lose the mere method of their flourishment. Ultimately, the entire environment of the earth would be devastated in the future,

hence

trying to stop many

species

' extinction must be prioritized in order to maintain a biological circulation.

Nevertheless

,

currently

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human beings have an enormous number of issues we should resolve,

such

as global warming and smuggling. Take the case of global warming

for example

. As the emission of fossil fuels has increased rapidly, most

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the countries now experience a rise in temperature to a certain extent. The sea level in Africa rises so quickly that dwellings of many

animals

are disappearing. It should be emphasized that

this

is one of the causes of the extinction. If we just attempt to preserve endangered

species

and no action will be put to deal with global warming, it would cause more serious effects.

Consequently

, preserving

animals

which are in

danger

is not the most incoming problem. To summarize, conserving the endangered

animals

is critical in order to maintain a well-balanced biological environment but we

also

need to highlight that there are many more issues which indirectly put several

animals

in

danger

. It is

therefore

obvious that the argument that preserving endangered

animals

is the most serious issue is not completely supported. After a thorough analysis of the subject that people should prioritize many

animals

which are about to extinct over any other hardships humans are tackling, the adverse effects of

this

idea will be always greater than the positive effects, and because of

this

, I maintain that people need to think about the whole problems comprehensively and had better concentrate more on the problems which would seriously affect our life.