More and more people are using internet nowadays for their personal things such as shopping and paying bills. Does advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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even if want to register for something we need
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I am going to discuss my opinion. In terms of the positive side, we need the
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societies can work without the
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one hour. The main reason given to support
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for half a day,
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a day without the
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