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Nowadays when people have to travel abroad for work, many takes their family members with them on the business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the individual and his or her family members who travel together?

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The plans illustrate how the airport looks today and how it will look after renovation
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 year. Overall, the airport will be extended northwards and some conveniences for visitors will be established, while the security sections will remain unchanged. Nowadays the port is divided into two parts, the takeoff on the left and the arrivals on the right. In the
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 of departures, there is a
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 at the right top of the plan and the check-in is in front of it, while there are no
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 facilities for those who arrive. People who leave the region, go through security passport control, whereas who come are checked by passport control customs workers. On the top of the
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, there are eight exits to the boards of the planes. In 2023 the
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 in the departures
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 will be replaced by check-in and the
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 will move to the bottom of the plan, close to the west wall, while the check-in will be replaced by bag drop. There will be few developments in the arrivals
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 as well. There will be a
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, in the
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 of the
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 and an ATM just under it.
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 space will be expanded at the bottom, in the eastward direction, where people will be able to rent a vehicle. After the departures go through all checks, there will be shops where they may make purchases. The number of gates will increase by 10 exits. The building will be extended in north-east and north-west directions, with five gates in each.
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