Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People
have differing views about advertising and some people
think that it is good at stimulating the urge of customers to buy their products while others hold the view that due to the recent prevalence of advertising everywhere, it becomes persuasive and no longer unique and no one wants to pay their attentions to it. In this
essay, I will describe the views of both sides and state my opinion.
First
of all, it is undeniable that almost everybody have
bought the things that they don't really even need because of the persuading Change the verb form
has
advertisements
and proponents of this
phenomenon point out that it not only give
us the information about their products but Change the verb form
gives
also
knowledges
that Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
worth
to note. Add a missing verb
is worth
For instance
, water bottle advertisements
share updates about their latest products as well as valuable information like how many times we need to drink water a day and which amount exactly needed per drink. Also
, it generates revenues not only for governmental tax incomes but also
for individuals whose incomes are
mainly come from the Unnecessary verb
apply
advertisements
such
as bloggers and youtubers
. That's why advertising is still influential and can induce customers to purchase things that are advertised
Turning to the opponents of Correct your spelling
YouTubers
this
case, they
highlight that Correct pronoun usage
apply
advertisements
can be seen everywhere and the effects of it become dull to majority
of the citizens. Not only they are abundant but Add an article
the majority
a majority
also
they are disturbing and annoying since they deter and destruct jobs
of employees and students by showing pop-up ads while they are researching on Correct article usage
the jobs
internet
or by sending promotion emails whilst they are checking for important messages. Add an article
the internet
Moreover
, ' skip ad' and ' close ad' functions are evidences
of the fact that Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
people
no longer want to give their interest to advertisements
. One more thing why they are losing Correct article usage
the attentions
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attention
attentions
of customers is that most of them are just focusing on exaggerating the value of their brands even though they don't have the quality Correct your spelling
attention
as
they Correct word choice
apply
told
to.
In a nutshell, I pen down saying that both options are acceptable, Add a missing verb
are told
however
, I believe people
nowadays buy things that they want to without involving the persuasions of advertisements
and still paying attention to them which are interesting and infromative
.Correct your spelling
informative
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