Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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have differing views about advertising and some

people

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think that it is good at stimulating the urge of customers to buy their products while others hold the view that due to the recent prevalence of advertising everywhere, it becomes persuasive and no longer unique and no one wants to pay their attentions to it. In

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essay, I will describe the views of both sides and state my opinion.

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of all, it is undeniable that almost everybody

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bought the things that they don't really even need because of the persuading

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and proponents of

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phenomenon point out that it not only

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us the information about their products but

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knowledges

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knowledge

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that

worth

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to note.

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, water bottle

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share updates about their latest products as well as valuable information like how many times we need to drink water a day and which amount exactly needed per drink.

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, it generates revenues not only for governmental tax incomes but

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for individuals whose incomes

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mainly come from the

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such

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as bloggers and

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YouTubers

. That's why advertising is still influential and can induce customers to purchase things that are advertised Turning to the opponents of

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highlight that

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can be seen everywhere and the effects of it become dull to

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of the citizens. Not only they are abundant but

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they are disturbing and annoying since they deter and destruct

jobs

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the jobs

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of employees and students by showing pop-up ads while they are researching on

internet

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or by sending promotion emails whilst they are checking for important messages.

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, ' skip ad' and ' close ad' functions are

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evidence

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of the fact that

people

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no longer want to give their interest to

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. One more thing why they are losing

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the attentions

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attention

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of customers is that most of them are just focusing on exaggerating the value of their brands even though they don't have the quality

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they

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to. In a nutshell, I pen down saying that both options are acceptable,

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, I believe

people

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nowadays buy things that they want to without involving the persuasions of

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and still paying attention to them which are interesting and

infromative

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informative

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