In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is believed that
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of the future
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will be self-driven, and
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will no longer be needed on buses and lorries.
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there are substantiated arguments on both sides, I believe that the advantages of reduction in human-related errors and reduced costs overweigh the disadvantages
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using automated driverless
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on the road. The primary advantage of utilizing driverless
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is that
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can minimize man-made accidents attributed to insufficient rest and careless mistakes of the driver. By using a well-formulated computer program, many human errors could be prevented. Night-time
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are a striking example. They often work in shifts, which is difficult for them to have adequate rest,
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increasing the possibility of road accidents due to fatigue.
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, automated machines can release the redundant labour force, allowing more human resources for other sectors of
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such
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as retail and
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. By doing so,
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will be reduced, and all sectors of the community will benefit from
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change. While some may raise the issue of safety and liability in automated
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with no
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, having a look at the case of schools from other industries and their grounds will collapse.
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, many planes and trains are now auto driven without an actual driver and
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well accepted for everyday use. By taking up careful precautionary
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, it is unlikely any salient problems will arise with driverless
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. To conclude, it is my firm belief that the merits of automobiles without
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would outweigh the disadvantages, as
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can significantly lower the chances of human-related accidents and provide human resources to other sectors of society
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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