In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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of the future

vehicles

will be self-driven, and

drivers

will no longer be needed on buses and lorries.

Although

there are substantiated arguments on both sides, I believe that the advantages of reduction in human-related errors and reduced costs overweigh the disadvantages

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using automated driverless

vehicles

on the road. The primary advantage of utilizing driverless

vehicles

is that

this

can minimize man-made accidents attributed to insufficient rest and careless mistakes of the driver. By using a well-formulated computer program, many human errors could be prevented. Night-time

drivers

are a striking example. They often work in shifts, which is difficult for them to have adequate rest,

thus

increasing the possibility of road accidents due to fatigue.

Furthermore

, automated machines can release the redundant labour force, allowing more human resources for other sectors of

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such

as retail and

healtcare

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healthcare

. By doing so,

transportation

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will be reduced, and all sectors of the community will benefit from

this

change. While some may raise the issue of safety and liability in automated

vehicles

with no

drivers

, having a look at the case of schools from other industries and their grounds will collapse.

For example

, many planes and trains are now auto driven without an actual driver and

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well accepted for everyday use. By taking up careful precautionary

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, it is unlikely any salient problems will arise with driverless

vehicles

. To conclude, it is my firm belief that the merits of automobiles without

drivers

would outweigh the disadvantages, as

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can significantly lower the chances of human-related accidents and provide human resources to other sectors of society