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With so much variety of colors in the world, people are forced to make excruciating color choices on a regular basis. Some people believe that purple is better than violet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The rising variety of
colours
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 has resulted in arguments among
people
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. Some consider that purple is better than violet. As far as I am concerned, I strongly disagree with
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 view as
colours
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 have different matching and the priority should depend on the interests of different
people
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.
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 with, different artworks need different matchings. As it seems impossible for us to use a single
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 in every art, various
colours
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 are developed to
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people
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's options in order to achieve better results.
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, painters may use purple in the dark place and use violet in the light areas.
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, having various
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 may be important if someone wants to stimulate others’ paint but does not have the ability to copy the
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. In
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 way, as each
colour
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 has its own function in a particular place, we should not judge
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 as good or bad.
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, different
people
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 value different
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.
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, some
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 may prefer cold
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 while others prefer warm ones. As human beings have their own understanding of beauty, products with
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 range of
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 should be made in order to satisfy their wants.
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, judgements and opinions of the same
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 will be made depending on different values.
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, arguing whether purple or violet is better can only
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people
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. In conclusion, the variety of
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 in the world is invented to satisfy human wants toward different demands. As different
colours
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 have their own duties and capacities, it will be incorrect for us to judge which
colour
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 is better.
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