saving is a good habit for an individual after retirement . do u agree or disagree? Give reasons and relevant examples in favour of your statement.

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In the current life of
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, the
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seems to be considered an essential issue. But
people
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don'
t
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care too much about that problem. Here is an article about the reasons
people
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really don'
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care too much about the
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.
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of all, the biggest reason most
people
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don'
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pay enough attention to the
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because that it doesn'
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directly affect their daily lives,
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phenomenon only gradually affects and
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flares up.
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certain point in time that when
people
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look back, they will deeply regret
for
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not caring about the
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.
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, most of them are only interested in everyday things like how to fix traffic accidents or how to control the problem of robbers.
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, the
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becomes an urgent phenomenon that
people
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need to pay attention to.
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, an equally big reason is that the role of the state and the media is not really clear in guiding
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on how to update information correctly and accurately.
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, there is a topic
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not really important or not necessary but gets too much media coverage and everyone responds to it. But the issues that are really urgent are not mentioned or ignored, which leads to
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not knowing too much.
To
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conclusion, the article shows us that there are really a lot of
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who are indifferent about environmental issues for many reasons
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as always paying that attention to the problems they encounter every day or the lack of the role of the government and the media. It leads to consequences
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environment
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in the near future there will be many bad things that no one can predict.
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