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The invention of the printing press in the 15th century changed the world by allowing more and more people to afford and access books and information.Today,however,books are becoming the latest victim of technology's move toward digital storage and accessibility.In fact,some people believe that the world will soon stop printing books and everything will be read off a screen. Do you agree that printed books will eventually disappear?Why or Why not?

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