Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, our planet faces a bunch of challenges in a particular environment. A handful of people believe that the major environmental issue

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these days due to loss especially

species

of

plants

and

animals

. Meanwhile, others argue that there are far crucial environmental

problems

. I

am completely agree

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with

this

latest. In

this

essay, I will discuss that the world is experiencing numerous

problems

.

To begin

with, due to the loss enormous of certain

species

of

plants

and

animals

, the planet saw many environmental

problems

,

such

as climate change. To illustrate, green space serves as a vast repository of oxygen

that is

consumed by humans and

animals

, and it considers the

first

reason that

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our world survive.

Moreover

,

plants

also

consumed carbon dioxide at night

besides

producing oxygen during the day,

in other words

, it reduces the ratio of CO2 in the air. What is more,

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a recent study said that the percentage of carbon dioxide in the air will probably increase the heat

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of our planet, resulting in melting the Arctic and causing fires in forests.

Thus

, it will end up

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starvation and escalate

water

levels, which can be a threat for disappearing some islands and countries.

On the other hand

, there are plenty of issues that are worth to look on it. One of them is the threat of the lack of

water

in the future.

For instance

,

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several areas around the world are facing

water

problems

, most of them the proportion of

water

is completely null. A number of people are suffering from disease due to lack of

water

sometimes they died if they do not get

water

for 3 days,

this

is the longest period that can a human being survive without

water

.

Hence

, some issues are more vital than the extinction of some

species

of

plants

and

animals

. In conclusion, some particular

species

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plants

and

animals

are facing the risk of extinction,

however

, the lack ration of

water

is much

important

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and

deserve

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more attention.