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Some people believe that the government should help the unemployed or just laid off from work on a weekly basis. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion

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The state has been providing financial aid to the jobless and those who have been let go from their various
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workplaces
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work places
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 for quite some time.
However
, recently
this
 has caused major debate among the general population with some fully supporting the idea and others
veiwing
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viewing
 it as a waste of time. I personally think that the government should continue helping the vulnerable so that they can still be able to afford rent,
health
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and health
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 care. Homelessness is one of the major problems arising from unemployment.
Alot
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A lot
 of families are finding themselves having to live in their cars or worse off on the streets because they don't have money to pay for housing.
This
 leads to
the
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 increase in crime, and street vending Wich
further
 leads to
a dirty and unorganized cities
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a dirty and unorganized city
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. Approximately 20
percent
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 of the population live
government
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 flats. Health insurance is one of the
thr
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the
three
 most important things a person should have,
however
 it has become very expensive that the common man cannot afford it.
State funded
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 healthcare has saved
alot
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a lot
 of lives by providing free medical reviews, medicine and
life saving
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 surgeries. A study recently conducted at the oxford university
,
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 showed that half the diabetic population depends on
the
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state funds in order to get their daily dose of insulin. In conclusion, the government should continue to help the
the
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community by providing them with homes and health care.
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