Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. write at least 250 words

Living in these current

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is considered the best of all

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by certain people, compared to all the other

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that we have lived through so far. History

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generation

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may not consider these

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as the best of all.

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essay will discuss why current

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is

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not the best of all that we have gone through in the past.

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with

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now is certainly considered the best of all

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by most of the younger

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;

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, they might

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kind of notion through very limited knowledge about our history. The current

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is the most

technology dependent

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that we have ever had in the entire history.

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kind of dependency is making humans act more like machines and hindering

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the development of cognitive

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. Some of the other things that are not so good about our time

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the

environment

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environmental

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damage that has led

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many biological disasters. Because of the damage caused by humans to the environment, we now experience a lot more of these disasters compared to the olden

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. Wars between nations have

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become common now compared to before, causing a lot more animosity between nations and communities. For these reasons, now is certainly not

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best time to be alive.

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, the older

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agrees to

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in many ways

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and considers some of their own

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as the best of all. Compared

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the other

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that we have experienced so far, 1990-1999 can be considered

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the greatest of all. These years are considered very fascinating by both the older

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and millennials that have lived through it. These years can be labelled as

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liaison

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between current technological advances and the birth of many gadgets and technologies that are not so relevant today, but served a greater purpose in the past. Discoveries of

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the internet

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, email, cell phones and many more laid down

groundwork

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for many of our current technologies. Not many people had access to these gadgets in the older

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as today since

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they were expensive to own.

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indeed shows that people were not so dependent on technology.

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, 1990-1999 can be considered as the best of all

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that we have lived through. To summarize, youngsters today would certainly consider

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time as the best of all,

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, in my

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the best

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that we have lived through are already gone. Many would disagree with

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notion. Lesser environmental damage,

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wars and less dependency on gadgets certainly

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1990 -1999 the best

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that have gone by so far.