Some developed countries have reduced the number of school hours. Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is irrefutable that the amount of

time

spend in

school

plays an imperative role in

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pupils

pupil

life

.

However

, the

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of

school

hours

have been lessened by wealthy nations in

this

contemporary era. Some people ponder that it is positive development while others oppose

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this

notion. But

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am in favour

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decreasing

school

hours

. To commence with, by depleting

hours

of

school

students

can participate in extracurricular

activities

. To elaborate

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, having a quality of

time

they are more likely to prefer in take part

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activities

which

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paramount importance not only for their mental health but

also

for their physical health. Apart from

this

, the burden of study would be lessened

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their shoulders and they will remain fit and healthy and

also

learn name and fame through these

activities

by showing their inner talent on account of having

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amount of

time

.

For example

, the headline of "The Moscow

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" newspaper revealed that those

students

who have to spend limited

time

in

school

have good

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in academics than those who spend

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quality

of

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time

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education providers.

Hence

, little

hours

which are fixed in developed countries can increase the level of critical thinking.

Furthermore

, if

students

have sufficient

time

after

school

time

then

they can make strong bonding with their family members. To

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explain

, they can not only share their inns and outs of them bit

also

gain knowledge of all walks of

life

from their parent's own

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.

Additionally

, owing to reduce

school

hours

, pupils feel more energetic and

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and they may not get bored

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completing their

school

tasks.

For example

, numerous studies have

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that in which schools are taught to

students

for

less

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hours

and they are

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productive and maintain a fine balance between

school

and home

life

.

As a result

, pupils grasp information in their spare

time

thereby broadening their horizons. In conclusion, by plummeting

school

hours

in

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world children not only indulge in various types of

activities

but

also

upgrade

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of their

life

by polishing themselves due to

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the availability

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of free

time

.