You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. Your don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter Say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have been an ardent follower of your articles in 'The Washington Post'. I wake up every Sunday very enthusiastically looking forward to your weekly column. The recent article about

town

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centres in Ireland was very informative, and quite interestingly pointed out many minute details about the architecture of

town

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centres, and eventually concluded that all most all of them look identical. Some interesting facts about

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centres

such

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as specific type of dome,

pillars

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and pillars

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nears

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the entrance can totally make anyone believe that all of them are similar. I too can relate to that kind of notion if I would be observing them for the

first

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time.

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this

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is not true and does not count various other aspects in which they are different. Some observations pointed out by you regarding their windows, doors and ceilings

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very fascinating and totally agree with. In many aspects

such

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as; the colour of dome, shape and sizes of the rooms,

number

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a number

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of floors, makes every

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centre very unique.

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I'd like to personally invite you to Ireland so that I offer you a guided tour

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a few of them so that you can get

different

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a different

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perspective after you visit them. Each of them

have

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a unique style which matches a city's culture and its essence. They have been designed keeping all these aspects in mind. I looking forward to hosting you in Ireland. Yours Sincerely, Seth

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

241 words

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