Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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contrary it helps to make the mind creative To commence with, why craft exercise is not essential , because it demands more effort. In detail working as an artist requires continuous efforts on Small Scale and one has to work in brief. for ,instance around 60% of their from primary schools love drawing as they grew up they get to know about details of each and everything , so working in detail requires more hard work and consumes more time. scion get easily distracted if they do not have any mentor to motivate them

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, not anybody can afford most of the tools and they are not easily available to people ,

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working as a sketch artist one has to purchase the various type of Pencils and special papers for making a sketch and these Products are only available in big cities so those who live in a rural area may not afford it , whereas some families live in weak financial conditions if they try to afford these products for their offspring there basic needs would not be fulfilled

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craft enterprise help scion to sharpen their mind and made them creative. ,

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profession does not have an endpoint, one can draw anything from its own thought to express any feeling ,

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, Leonardo Davinci the well-known artist who had drawn a famous Painting the Monalisa, most

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the researchers trying to figure out the main aim of the profession. at

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, offspring can learn how to express their feelings In nutshell,

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a type of action would not help in future because it requires a big motive. whereas anybody is not capable to pursue

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, on the other ,hand it helps children to develop creativeness and they can express their feelings.