In many countries, there is a shortage of housing due to growing population. Some people argue that new towns should be built in the countryside, others argue for the regeneration of cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of building new towns in the country side?

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life
expectancy over the past decades is contributing to a rapidly growing population which is associated with many problems.
One
of the issues
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from overpopulation is the shortage of housing which it is believed could be tackled by creating new
towns
in the
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country side
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.
This
essay will examine
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and negative aspects of
this
approach. On
one
hand, in many
countries
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small
towns
are at risk of dying out due to younger generations moving into big cities in
pursue
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of a more exciting
life
.
However
, many families living in more populated areas may be looking into a quieter
life
in the
country side
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which could be facilitated by building more houses in these areas.
This
measure would benefit both, the local community and the new neighbours. Notwithstanding,
this
growth in small
towns
may lead to some disadvantages.
One
consequence of increasing the population is the development of infrastructure
such
as roads, schools, official buildings and parks necessary to accommodate the new volume of people.
This
will, inevitable, be associated with an impact on the environment as well as the traditional character of those
towns
.
Similarly
, the peaceful lifestyle that normally
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these small
towns
may be spoiled by
such
change in their population which will be difficult to ever gain again. In conclusion, overpopulation is a reality that needs to be addressed and
one
of the solutions may be promoting new housing in small
towns
.
However
, whilst
this
measure can be associated with many advantages including improving the
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life style
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of the new arrivals, the
potential
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detrimental consequences, especially those related to the environment, should not be disregarded.
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