The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps show the development of a university

campus

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from 2010 to the present day. It can be seen from the maps that the

campus

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has been improved and extended, with much more student accommodation and facilities than previously.

Firstly

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, the number of student accommodation buildings has

been

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increased in number and size. A previous accommodation block south of the lake has been destroyed and replaced by a new building for students, which includes shops and offices.

In addition

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, the teaching facilities have been extended. The previous single teaching block has been changed into a block only for arts subjects and there is a new building for the sciences to the north of the

campus

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This

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has replaced the old university offices. The lawn and outside seating area which were

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to the lake have been removed. The lake,

however

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, has remained and is still the central point of the

campus

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words campus with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

campus
renovation
infrastructure
facilities
sustainable
accessibility
layout
pedestrian zones
transportation routes
parking facilities
greenery
sports center
lecture halls
demolition
modernize
expansion
enhancement
comprehensive development

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